She was the first girl born into a large family of boys. She is loved and pampered by everyone in the family, the apple of their eyes! Her parent’s favorite child, her brothers’ favorite sibling and the most favored grandchild. She celebrated love! Until….
High school was amazing, she felt like a grown up. Away from the pampering family she felt different but alive. As one of the ‘popular’ kids she had a large group of friends! There was nothing in the world that she did not have, until that day when she saw him. The moment she laid eyes on him, she knew he was the one. All she wanted was to be with him, to feel his presence! He was the one and she wanted to let him know that. But every time he was near, words seemed to fail her. All she could do was stare into his big brown eyes. The only other person who knew about her feelings for him was her best friend.
One fine day she decided to let him know how she felt, he didn’t seem to notice her feelings for him. So she mustered up the courage and walked up to him, but all she could say was “Hi……!” and then she stood there mesmerized staring into his eyes! He waited for her to speak, she continued to stare and he walks away!
Next day, she sees him again, but this time he is not alone. Holding hands, they walk together admiring each other. It was him and her best friend! Heart broken, she turns and walks away. Tears streaming down her face she promised herself….never again!
College was great, she was discovering herself and was a part of every activity! She was Student Council Member, President of the Literary Club, Member of the College Dance and Drama Team. She felt accomplished! She was doing so much!
Then one day a handsome young man walks into class, she looks up from her desk. She feels that strange pull in her heart. She does not want to feel that way. “Who is this person who just walked into class?” she wonders. He walks into the center of the class and introduces himself “Good morning class, I am the new Guest Lecturer and I will be replacing your professor for this semester.”
For days, she tries really hard to suppress that strange feeling in her heart, but it keeps knocking her down, getting stronger each time! Unable to bear it anymore she walks up to him after class, this time with enough courage to speak her heart! Before she can say anything, he says “I know what you want to say, I see it in your eyes! But the fact is that you are my student and I can never let you be anything more than that!” Heartbroken she turns and walks away. Tears streaming down her face she promised herself….never again!
She is a successful professional busy living her fast paced life. There is only one thing on her mind and that is her dream job at the very top! Today, her boss introduced her to the Manager for their newest business segment. They shook hands and talked business rest of the day. She noticed his brooding eyes, it was serenely divine! She thought she felt the sparks fly, but more from him than her! Did she read him right, or was she imagining it? She pulls herself together reminding herself of her goal. That is what is important and that is what she will focus on!
Then one day, he walks up to her wearing his charming smile looking divine, he gazes into her eyes and says those magical words that she desirously waited to hear. She looks down into her hands at the confirmation letter. She had just accepted the position to head the company’s new segment in the East. The position she had been vying for all those years! “I am sorry but this is not going to work!” she hears herself speak out. Heartbroken he turns and walks away! She clutches the letter tighter in her hands. Tears streaming down her face she promised herself….never again!
Written in response to the Day 13 Assignment of Writing 101: A Series of Vignettes!
Maddy at Home
I enjoyed your vignettes of thwarted love!
Thank you Maddy, Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
A wonderful take on the assignment. I could feel her disappointment. I enjoy reading it 🙂
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it! I was not sure if I captured the essence of the assignment in the post!
You sure did. It’s a great vignette 🙂
Thank you! Makes me feel better hearing that I was really doubtful posting this.
You’re welcome 🙂
This was very different from other vignettes I have read so far 🙂 How sometime we are crushed by others and how we do same to others 🙁
Absolutely! And the sad part is we feel we are not wrong in doing it because that’s what we experienced!
So true 🙂 even if realization hit us ..its too late to undo the wrong done 🙂
Hmm…then the person is forced to face the trauma of that late realization!
yeah ..and such is life 🙂 you learn bit by bit 🙂
Oh. Your vignettes are painful but they are all well-written. Nice one! 😀
Thank you Rose! 🙂
i enjoyed reading it, would say Never give up!!
That’s great advice! 😀
Very emotive read. Well done!
Thank you Jacqueline! 🙂
You are welcome 🙂
You have captured the essence very well indeed. I could see the distinct but related scenes very vividly as you painted the beautiful picture with the same character–shy but romantic and yearning for magical touch of love.
The last bit is kind of unexpected and mysterious and hence very beautiful too. Your writing is capable of moving hearts–positively and otherwise. You have selected beautiful images too.
Thanks for doing this wonderful piece.
LOve, light and peace. <3
Encouraging as always, thank you so much for your kind words, Anand! I was really not sure of posting this one because I doubted my understanding of the vignette series writing. it is not something I have done before! But there’s always a first time for everything! 🙂
Yes, and you have done it remarkably well. I feel you shouldn’t hesitate, because there is no ‘perfect’ way of doing assignments in creative writing. Anything you do and enjoy will take you towards more freedom 🙂
Very well said….! There never is a perfect way for creative writing. The word creative has a broad range of meanings that can be applied to it! You are absolutely right in saying that we should only focus on writing from the heart and enjoying it instead of worrying about perfection. Thank you my friend will take that advise to heart! 🙂
Hehehe, yes very true. Thanks a lot for esteeming it 🙂 Love and light <3
Dr Meg Sorick
Writing 101 is keeping you guys busy!!! It’s been fun to follow along and see the different takes on the assignments! Once again, you’ve done a wonderful job! The feeling of looking back and thinking, “if only” and “the next time I’ll do it differently” we all have experienced at one time or another. Great work!
Oh it definitely is keeping us busy! It is pushing me out of my comfort zone! Well I guess that’s a good thing!
Thank you, Meg! This story is a mix of facts and fiction 😉
Loved it! Great job! Can’t wait to read more. 😉
Thank you Kimberly 🙂
We fall (in love), we get back up, fall again, get back up… Each time gives us new experience, new memories… Great story! 🙂
So true! Each time we fall we promise not to let ourself fall again but then the heart never listens to the brain!
Thank you for reading 🙂
This is so poetic, almost tragic, yet beautiful. Well done! I look forward to reading more of you vignettes!
Thank you so much Reeanna! I am not sure if I will do vignettes again, I was struggling with this task! 🙂
I’m sure! It is not easy. You did it beautifully though, I never would have known 🙂
Thank you! That was encouraging….I will keep the vignette option in mind, maybe someday when inspiration strikes I can attempt again! 😉
Great writing that keeps one’s attention. Fulfills the vignette assignment perfectly.
Thank you so much Oneta! 🙂
I loved reading this. This certainly works very well 🙂 Loved the sequence where her love isn’t returned and in the end, her priorities are different and it’s her turn to turn the other person down. Congrats, it very well written.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂