Microfiction, Six Word Story

Six Word Story: Betrayal

September 28, 2015 / 19 Comments

The theme for this week: Betrayal

Our Love. Your Deceit. My Tragedy!

Six Word Story Challenge by Benedict Nicholson of A Hopelessly Wandering Mind.

Rashmi P. Menon

A Single Mother with an unbreakable passion to Live the Life! I am a Writer/Author by passion and an IT Project Manager by profession. I am also the voice of Artemis at In The Pantheon - a multi-author collaborative writing project. When not hunting as Artemis, I am busy querying agents and working on my multiple writing projects. Women Empowerment and Child Rights Advocate.

19 Comments

Dr Meg Sorick

September 28, 2015 at 4:35 pm Reply

I envision Lady MacBeth!
- MindandLifeMatters
  
  September 28, 2015 at 4:42 pm Reply
  
  Tada! Spot on! 😀
  - Dr Meg Sorick
    
    September 28, 2015 at 4:45 pm Reply
    
    Great minds think alike! Haha!
    - MindandLifeMatters
      
      September 28, 2015 at 4:55 pm Reply
      
      I agree! 😉
Karuna

September 28, 2015 at 4:52 pm Reply

Very strong piece!
- MindandLifeMatters
  
  September 28, 2015 at 4:56 pm Reply
  
  Thank you Karuna! 🙂
  - Karuna
    
    September 28, 2015 at 4:57 pm Reply
    
    It is amazing what can be conveyed in six words!
    - MindandLifeMatters
      
      September 28, 2015 at 5:00 pm Reply
      
      Absolutely! Some six word stories can convey an entire novel!
Lynz Real Cooking

September 28, 2015 at 8:55 pm Reply

Wow
- MindandLifeMatters
  
  September 28, 2015 at 9:03 pm Reply
  
  Thank you, Lynz 🙂
  - Lynz Real Cooking
    
    September 28, 2015 at 9:06 pm Reply
    
    very stunning!
Vibrant

September 29, 2015 at 4:11 am Reply

Intense, lady Macbeth 😛
I won’t spoil this intensity by saying Love and light <3 lol
Anand 🙂
- MindandLifeMatters
  
  September 29, 2015 at 6:20 am Reply
  
  Haha…yea Lady Macbeth! 😛
  - Vibrant
    
    September 29, 2015 at 6:21 am Reply
    
    LOL 😀
kathiegregory

September 30, 2015 at 11:52 am Reply

Great! So many ideas and thoughts as to the details, I want to know more – a good story indeed! Best wishes, kathie
- MindandLifeMatters
  
  September 30, 2015 at 1:33 pm Reply
  
  Thank you Kathie! The story is open to interpretation but this one is based on Lady Macbeth! 🙂
Kay Morris

October 1, 2015 at 7:59 pm Reply

Good one! So much said in 6 simple words.
thelonelyauthorblog

December 19, 2015 at 2:57 pm Reply

Excellent
- MindandLifeMatters
  
  December 19, 2015 at 3:05 pm Reply
  
  Thank you!

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